Saturday, May 21, 2022

Soul Speak

 


Put your ear down close to your soul and listen hard. ~Anne Sexton

 

There is another voice that speaks,

a poem with lines that drape softly like garland upon the rails.

I hear it like a child’s cry.

I hold it that way too!

It is a message that bears no envelope,

and a wingless bird that still shall sing.

There is no thunder bolt of lightning.

No trembling beneath bare feet.

Just the soft whisper of a certain knowing

that only night stars can surely speak.

Its absence is a deeper ache

 like the kind in an old man’s bones.

For lonely hands hold love like reigns on a galloping horse.

Trying to stop it from fleeing too far off course.

And it is surely a weary occupation

trying to be a god of greater things,

when we do not learn to listen

 for heaven is trying to speak.

 

 Linking with the Sunday Muse for Muse # 211

Happy Birthday Weekend Shay! 💕



 


22 comments:

  1. This is a lovely, peaceful poem, Carrie, with a thread of melancholy through it, as well as a brighter strand of hope. Thanks for the birthday wishes; I am now 12. :-P

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    1. Thank you so much Shay!! 😍 I do hope you enjoy your birthday tomorrow and 12 yes I can still remember 12 and part of me is there. 😊

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  2. This poem really speaks to me....the hands holding love like reins on a galloping horse! Whoaaaaa! LOVE those four closing lines especially.

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    1. I am so glad it spoke to you Sherry. I really enjoyed yours too.

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  3. “Just the soft whisper of a certain knowing“ ... beautiful

    The lines four lines are powerful.

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    1. “last four lines ...” Sorry about that.

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    2. Thank you so much Shawna for stopping by and reading it.

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  4. "And it is surely a weary occupation

    trying to be a god of greater things,"

    Profound caution

    Happy Sunday

    Much💛love

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    1. Thank you for stopping by and reading Gillena.

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  5. I have begun to wonder if anyone is really listening ... a lovely poem Ms. Carrie.

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  6. Holding on to love does need tending but a runaway team of horses can't be controlled by holding reins tight, I think not for love either.
    ..
    Jim,
    Holding on to love does need tending but a runaway team of horses can't be controlled by holding reins tight, I think not for love either.
    ..
    Jim,
    Holding on to love does need tending but a runaway team of horses can't be controlled by holding reins tight, I think not for love either.
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    Jim,

    Holding on to love does need tending but a runaway team of horses can't be controlled by holding reins tight, I think not for love either.
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    Jim,
    Holding on to love does need tending but a runaway team of horses can't be controlled by holding reins tight, I think not for love either.
    ..
    Jim,
    https://jimmiehov6.blogspot.com/2022/05/a-tribute-poem.html?m=0

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  7. Sorry, Carrie, I didn't realize it was posting every time. I couldn't get my ID link to paste. Jim,
    Holding on to love does need tending but a runaway team of horses can't be controlled by holding reins tight, I think not for love either.
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    Jim,
    Holding on to love does need tending but a runaway team of horses can't be controlled by holding reins tight, I think not for love either.
    ..
    Jim,
    Holding on to love does need tending but a runaway team of horses can't be controlled by holding reins tight, I think not for love either.
    ..
    Jim,

    Holding on to love does need tending but a runaway team of horses can't be controlled by holding reins tight, I think not for love either.
    ..
    Jim,
    Holding on to love does need tending but a runaway team of horses can't be controlled by holding reins tight, I think not for love either.
    ..
    Jim,
    https://jimmiehov6.blogspot.com/2022/05/a-tribute-poem.html?m=0
    ..

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  8. While reading I memorized something beautiful, then something else, then again.... This is so wonderful!!!!

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  9. This is beautifully wrought Carrie - soulful and gentle.

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  10. Your poem is such a beautiful reminder to listen. I especially love these lines:

    "For lonely hands hold love like reigns on a galloping horse."

    "And it is surely a weary occupation

    trying to be a god of greater things,"

    <3

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  11. Just the soft whisper of a certain knowing....great line. We all use to have that insight but we stopped listening long long ago trying to be a god of greater things. Beautifully crafted poem.

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  12. "Just the soft whisper of a certain knowing

    that only night stars can surely speak."


    Gorgeous poem, Carrie!

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