The broken heart is broadest. ~Emily Dickinson
In dreams my heart is a raven
free and distant like the stars
the haunting that regrets hold
is loose like running
wolves always are
I don’t fear the fall nor the sharp edges that cut to bone
I can see beyond the broken glass
I hear beyond the moan
yet in life lost is a sadder place
than a fallen forest or abandoned church
it is emptier than a drunk man’s bottle
and more painful than giving birth
for among the fullest branches
are the broken and the wild
regret loss and disease
each have memories like a child
That haunt us to the core
Or is it the memories we cannot forget?
That haunt us even more.
I expect it is a mixture of the two. Your piece ties in beautifully with the image, Carrie.
ReplyDeleteCarrie- so gorgeous!
ReplyDeleteLovely metaphors. Beautiful write.
ReplyDeleteFor me, it is the memories I cant forget that haunt. This is beautiful, Carrie.
ReplyDelete"for among the fullest branches / are the broken and the wild" Oh my yes. So good.
ReplyDeleteOh this is wonderful Carrie. And yes, those we cannot forget are the ones that haunt us more.
ReplyDeleteThis sends chills down my back.
ReplyDeleteSo many good lines in this, Carrie, and such vivid images:"the haunting that regrets hold/ is loose like running wolves.." I love that, and the way the poem winds in and out through the dark forests of our lives, raising our fears, showing our most desperate strengths, and posing questions that, like all the most important ones, have only an ambiguous answer.
ReplyDeleteVery fluid flowing down the page, Carrie. I like the shape of your poem also, it's a vessel, and oh what it holds. Favorite lines:
ReplyDelete"for among the fullest branches
are the broken and the wild"
Carrie, I am impressed with your description of the "heart" in understanding it's feelings, the wolf will lead my group. In choosing for your final question posed I will take the "the memories we cannot forget" as the others are out of mind NOW. May I never be reminded of those I have forgotten.
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This is haunting Carrie.
ReplyDeleteLuv your superlative images " like a drunk man's empty bottle."
Happy you dropped by my blog
Much💜love
I recently learned of the Portuguese word "saudade" or "sodade", which has no direct English translation, but which is apropos here - a longing for someone not present, who may not ever be (again). The rhyme and cadence bring even greater potency to your pen ~
ReplyDeleteThose last two lines really have me thinking. Wonderful, Carrie!
ReplyDeleteOr is it the memories we cannot forget?
ReplyDeleteThat haunt us even more.
Love the beautiful metaphors! Yes, Carrie, those constantly in memory reminding us,
are the frightful ones. Great close, Ma'am!
Hank
Oh, this speaks to me right now. Beautiful, haunting poetry
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