You don't have to suffer to be a poet. Adolescence is enough
suffering for anyone. ~John Ciardi
and each hurt is a million falls
from the same kicked shoe
a heart has trees upon mountains
that no soul can
climb
we hold empty hands and loads of time
wide eyed we see the horizon
like a barbed wire fence yet an open gate
freedom’s curse and then freedom’s fate
for blue eyes see a heavy plot
what home should be
and what home is not
in 1978 I sang of broken dreams
as my voice carried on a drunken breeze
of my grandfather’s stories and my mother’s lies
It kept me searching
naïve yet wise
I wrote those songs to hear your voice
and see the truth
to find my path
beyond the plight of youth.
And you did!
ReplyDeleteWhy we love and respect you, Ms. Carrie. Brava.
ReplyDeleteFifteen doesnt seem that long ago, yet what a journey it has been. I love this, Carrie.
ReplyDeleteFinding our path beyond the plight of youth is sometimes a rocky road. Glad you made it!
ReplyDeleteThis is sadly moving Carrie, and I am finding some of myself in this piece. Well written!
ReplyDeleteCarrie, I really like this, it begs of the reader's memory. The first to hit me was "broken dreams," I have several (many?) but never realized or thought that way. I've had so many open doors I couldn't dwell long on the ones slammed in my face with my arm caught tight.
ReplyDeleteI don't talk of them nor do I cry visibly. Mostly I remember all the good times before.
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"we hold empty hands and loads of time"
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Much❤love
Oh my gosh, the label punched me in the gut.
ReplyDeleteIt is a wonder we make it through those confusing, scary years.
So many great lines in this Carrie, the heart with its tree-strewn mountains, the title itself, and my favorite.."we see the horizon/
ReplyDeletelike a barbed wire fence yet an open gate/freedom’s curse and then freedom’s fate.." A wise and musical poem.
This is just wonderful! Pulls you in and keeps you there.
ReplyDeleteIt's a wonder anyone survives adolescence! The hormones compounded with,
ReplyDelete"each hurt is a million falls
from the same kicked shoe"
makes it something few would want to repeat. Good job of describing those years.
Tons of exquisite lines here :) My favorite has to be: 'a heart has trees upon mountains/
ReplyDeletethat no soul can climb'
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