Put your ear
down close to your soul and listen hard. ~Anne Sexton
There is another voice that speaks,
a poem with lines that drape softly like garland upon the
rails.
I hear it like a child’s cry.
I hold it that way too!
It is a message that bears no envelope,
and a wingless bird that still shall sing.
There is no thunder bolt of lightning.
No trembling beneath bare feet.
Just the soft whisper of a certain knowing
that only night stars can surely speak.
Its absence is a deeper ache
like the kind in an
old man’s bones.
For lonely hands hold love like reigns on a galloping horse.
Trying to stop it from fleeing too far off course.
And it is surely a weary occupation
trying to be a god of greater things,
when we do not learn to listen
for heaven is trying
to speak.
This is a lovely, peaceful poem, Carrie, with a thread of melancholy through it, as well as a brighter strand of hope. Thanks for the birthday wishes; I am now 12. :-P
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Shay!! 😍 I do hope you enjoy your birthday tomorrow and 12 yes I can still remember 12 and part of me is there. 😊
DeleteThis poem really speaks to me....the hands holding love like reins on a galloping horse! Whoaaaaa! LOVE those four closing lines especially.
ReplyDeleteI am so glad it spoke to you Sherry. I really enjoyed yours too.
Delete“Just the soft whisper of a certain knowing“ ... beautiful
ReplyDeleteThe lines four lines are powerful.
“last four lines ...” Sorry about that.
DeleteThank you so much Shawna for stopping by and reading it.
Delete"And it is surely a weary occupation
ReplyDeletetrying to be a god of greater things,"
Profound caution
Happy Sunday
Much💛love
Thank you for stopping by and reading Gillena.
DeleteI have begun to wonder if anyone is really listening ... a lovely poem Ms. Carrie.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much my friend!
DeleteHolding on to love does need tending but a runaway team of horses can't be controlled by holding reins tight, I think not for love either.
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Jim,
Holding on to love does need tending but a runaway team of horses can't be controlled by holding reins tight, I think not for love either.
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Holding on to love does need tending but a runaway team of horses can't be controlled by holding reins tight, I think not for love either.
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Jim,
Holding on to love does need tending but a runaway team of horses can't be controlled by holding reins tight, I think not for love either.
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Jim,
Holding on to love does need tending but a runaway team of horses can't be controlled by holding reins tight, I think not for love either.
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Jim,
https://jimmiehov6.blogspot.com/2022/05/a-tribute-poem.html?m=0
Sorry, Carrie, I didn't realize it was posting every time. I couldn't get my ID link to paste. Jim,
ReplyDeleteHolding on to love does need tending but a runaway team of horses can't be controlled by holding reins tight, I think not for love either.
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Jim,
Holding on to love does need tending but a runaway team of horses can't be controlled by holding reins tight, I think not for love either.
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Jim,
Holding on to love does need tending but a runaway team of horses can't be controlled by holding reins tight, I think not for love either.
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Jim,
Holding on to love does need tending but a runaway team of horses can't be controlled by holding reins tight, I think not for love either.
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Jim,
Holding on to love does need tending but a runaway team of horses can't be controlled by holding reins tight, I think not for love either.
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https://jimmiehov6.blogspot.com/2022/05/a-tribute-poem.html?m=0
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While reading I memorized something beautiful, then something else, then again.... This is so wonderful!!!!
ReplyDeleteAwwww thank you so much Syl!
DeleteThis is beautifully wrought Carrie - soulful and gentle.
ReplyDeleteYour poem is such a beautiful reminder to listen. I especially love these lines:
ReplyDelete"For lonely hands hold love like reigns on a galloping horse."
"And it is surely a weary occupation
trying to be a god of greater things,"
<3
Just the soft whisper of a certain knowing....great line. We all use to have that insight but we stopped listening long long ago trying to be a god of greater things. Beautifully crafted poem.
ReplyDelete"Just the soft whisper of a certain knowing
ReplyDeletethat only night stars can surely speak."
Gorgeous poem, Carrie!
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