Sunday, March 27, 2022

The Open Doors & the Slammed Ones,

 



Each substance of a grief hath twenty shadows... ~William Shakespeare

It is the open arms that we long for;
the bright lighting up of the eyes when we enter the room.
An old man can deny it, but the 5 year old within still knows.
We want to be welcomed like a sunflower field,
or the sweet voice of a grandmother at the door.
The need to truly belong is a force in itself.
You see everything in life has an impact;
the power of love and the compulsion of hurt.
The open doors and the slammed ones,
the last words spoken and the welcoming's,
our heart never forgets them.
You were too weary for open arms,
and too hurt to truly shine.
Truths an old man can discern,
but a child 
 can only feel lost in the darkness of it all.
For it is the open arms that we long for;
the bright lighting up of the eyes when we enter the room.
An old man can deny it, but the 5 year old within me still knows.

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16 comments:

  1. "We want to be welcomed like a sunflower field" - Yes!

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  2. The need to truly belong is a force in itself, yes it is. We yearn for a warm embrace. Wisely spoken.

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  3. Oh wow, this could not be more true, or more beautifully stated. That is it EXACTLY.

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  4. Wonderful.
    Like a mantra.
    The open arms, that slowly close, warm and loving.

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  5. There is an aching in your poem … I feel it.

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  6. We all want to belong and be welcomed, don't we? Good to see you writing!!!

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  7. The child theme is so true to life, Carrie.

    Sincerely,
    David

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  8. So very true, Carrie - open arms and warm words are the welcome we seek. Love this line: 'We want to be welcomed like a sunflower field,'

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  9. "the power of love and the compulsion of hurt."
    (These words resonate with the title of the poem).

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  10. Most of my childhood is a blur. My favorite memory is of a trip to Missouri for a visit with my maternal grandmother. A lot of her rubbed of on me that year.

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    1. I am still in isolation with Mrs. Jim. We are both doing almost fine now, she will be free Wednesday and me on Saturday.
      I should share this experience and the long time ago trip seeing Grandma. Probably I won't.
      ..

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  11. This is so heartfelt and true, Carrie. And no matter how old and tired we become, the five year old is still there.

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  12. That reverberation of denial and truth is powerful!

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  13. Carrie, your poem is wonderful and I've always felt that kind of welcome here, at The Sunday Muse. For that, I thank you. My favorite line:
    "the 5 year old within me still knows"

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