Linking with the Sunday Muse for Muse # 134 hosted this week by the incredibly talented poet and my friend Shay!
Come join us!
What matters is not the idea a man holds, but the depth at
which he holds it. ~Ezra Pound
The Soul of a Poet,
Lately I have been thinking a lot about life and of death
pondering upon what is held between every sigh and final
breath
Is it the caged canary or the crow with broken wings
that carries the greatest misery
and holds the deepest sting?
there in the asking poetry surrounds me inked in the color
of night
it stains my heart and hands and then fills my truest sight
I long to find answers so I reach out with thirsty hands
and head into every
wall that blocks the place in which I stand
it is a painful journey when answers are not always found
and questions get lost between the silence and the sound
for lately I have been thinking a lot about death and of
life
and I believe all the answers are poetically before my eyes
Is it the convict or the paraplegic in a chair
that carries the greatest misery
and holds the deepest cares?
I shall ask these questions as long as I can speak
to anyone listening
to you
and you
and me.
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Crashed Cars,
hard hearts always hit us with the most force
crashing into us like cars
we end up seriously injured
while they seem untouched
yet we have the strength to heal
while they are the ones that remain stagnant
covered in the same old callous
and that is the most broken a heart can be.
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Conversations I Had with
My Husband,
You can talk till you are blue In the face
but if someone is not
listening
it is all waisted breath
and talking to walls never got anyone anywhere
except walking to the medicine cabinet for some headache
medicine
and making an appointment with a divorce attorney
turning the conversation around
from husband to
an Ex.
"Out of sight out of mind" doesn't work entirely when it comes to ex's. Functions with kids and payment disputes close the distances. When our youngest outgrew child support and my ex moved to West Texas, 541 miles away, my heart began to heal. My soul was nurished because all the kids were near. here in the Houston area. The kiicker came years and years ago when we sat next to each other on Grandparent Row at our middle grabddaughter's wedding. I have complete healing and hope she has. The kicker was at the wedding when she wasn't the same person I had known. My soul and heart in relation to her were 100% fresh and now my mind is 99% cleared as well.
ReplyDeleteMonkeys and crows bother me not.
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Loved the three separate poems loosely based on a similar theme: life is a headache most times.
ReplyDelete"questions get lost between the silence and the sound" - wonderful. And the way you pace down the ending of the first poem worked really well. I really loved the Crashed Cars metaphor - "that is the most broken a heart can be" is excellent. Nice pivot of "husband" and "Ex" in the last poem.
ReplyDeleteThese took my breath away. An amazing write.
ReplyDeleteLove the tag from that great song 'all my ex's live in Texas." I have one there, too, if he's still alive. This is a powerful triptych of musings, all set forth starkly and with that necessary honesty that marks insight. I believe we must always ask ourselves questions like this, as you set out in your first poem, where rhyme serves you so well. The second with its harsh but true metaphor strikes with much the same force--we heal, but a car is only repaired, always a little less than what it was before the crash. The third is that conversation no one wants but everyone always has at some point when things are just wrong. Headaches and medicine and lawyers, indeed. Well done, Carrie, all the way through.
ReplyDeleteLaced with pain, resonating our era of pandemic and narrowed down to reality of day
ReplyDeleteBe Safe, keep hope alive
Thanks for dropping by my blog today Carrie
Much💝love
Three ... for the price of one? How lucky are we! Crashed cars, death, ex-husbands (happy my ex is one of my finest friends. Cheers.
ReplyDeleteWonderful, Carrie. I especially love your first one., with its caged canary and its crow. I seem to be without words recently, but still enjoy reading them. The words will return when I have less on my mind.
ReplyDeleteGoodness, both poems are so striking, so emotive with the power of truth. Amazing writing Carrie!
ReplyDeleteI love your triptych here, especially the second section. So glad that the image spoke to you clearly!
ReplyDeleteLove all three, Carrie. The first one depicts exactly how questions are asked,
ReplyDeleteand never quite answered.
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