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The cave you fear to enter holds the treasure you seek. ~Joseph Campbell
Linking with The Sunday Muse for Muse # 67 and Telling Tales
with lovely Magaly A Pantry of Prose # 6 ~ Stitches at Poet’s United
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The cave you fear to enter holds the treasure you seek. ~Joseph Campbell
Scrapes from the jagged edges of glass are always messy and
painful, but they usually heal soon enough.
It is the scrapes from the jagged edges of hearts that need stitches and
a life time of healing. That kind of hurt
does not leave soon enough, and has a way of changing the way we look at
ourselves and others. We learn to keep a
distance. A place that seems safer, but
seems to keeps our vision impaired.
Bernice spent years in a place just like that. Somewhere that was right there, maybe even
next door, but still far enough away from the jagged places that hurt. She may smile, and say hello, but you were
never going to truly get close.
No one ever saw her much.
She went to work, and then she went back home to a cat named Slugger. Most of the time Slugger was enough. He made coming home sweet. He was a comfort indeed, but sometimes she
longed for something more.
One day Bernice left the window open to catch a cool breeze. Slugger had never tried to leave the apartment
before, like her he preferred his safe domain.
She was never sure why this day was different, but today Slugger peered
close to the edge of the window, watching the people in the distance. There was a tall oak that stood just yards
away from her apartment and a squirrel had been playing there. Slugger cautiously watched, and then jumped
out the window heading straight for the oak and that squirrel.
He never caught the squirrel, but he got a taste of freedom
that he had never known, and discovered he had a fear of falling. The handsome Fireman McKenzie got him down
and gingerly placed him in Bernice’s shaky arms. Soon Bernice would learn some risks are worth
taking and not all falls require stitches.
Love the story and so pleased Slugger is safe.
ReplyDeleteThank you Eddie so glad you joined us this week! 😎
DeleteFirst, I almost lost it when I saw Slugger so close to that window. I wanted to stop reading, I didn't want to see what might happen if he never got to the tree... But I took a risk. And got all the way to the end, and I am smiling. Deliriously please, me... ad Bernice. :-D
ReplyDeleteWonderful tale!
And thank you so much for joining the Pantry of Prose.
I am thrilled that you liked it Magaly! I so love the Pantry of Prose! It pulls me out of my comfort zone every time. 😎🌻
DeleteThe beauty of cats like slugger depth may not appear real until they take the fall. Only then it would be a discovery to them!
ReplyDeleteHank
I love the message this sends, great write, Carrie.
ReplyDeleteSlugger is a great name for a cat,
ReplyDeleteA well written and suspenseful story with a profound lesson. I know a few Bernices in my life, I wish they had Slugger to help them conquer their fears and taste freedom. Really brilliant story!
ReplyDeleteSlugger is responsible for a lot in this story. Bless him. He brought Bernice freedom too and love. I like this story immensely. Way to go Slugger!
ReplyDeleteThat is so true about the scrapes from the jagged edges of hearts, Carrie, and I can understand why some of us stay away from ‘jagged places that hurt’. Cats are great companions when you live like that – I know, I have two. I’m so glad Bernice and Slugger had a happy ending.
ReplyDeleteI am SO glad Slugger didnt fall, and was rescued. Losing him would have been too much for a heart that had alredy been broken. Such a good story, Carrie, so well-told.
ReplyDeleteA valuable lesson learned in this story. It's so easy to hide in that dark place where there's no pain. I love how you told it
ReplyDeleteI was all, "Slugger, nooooooooooo!" But I loved the happy twist at the end.
ReplyDeleteWonderful writing in this fable-esque tale! I couldn't help noticing that your clarity of construction pulled this piece together seamlessly. Awesome ending for a late Sunday afternoon read … in fact, a pleasure to read. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteThank god, slugger was rescued. Sometimes a leap of faith is necessary for a comfy ending. A beautifully told story.
ReplyDeleteGreat story – and what a lovely, romantic, happy ending.
ReplyDeleteReading your story, for a moment, i was anxious and terrified for Slugger. i was like, no! Don't! and then that happy ending. what a lovely story! :)
ReplyDeleteHow wonderful that it was her cat that took the first leap!
ReplyDeleteYea!! for Slugger's moment of self-discovery :) Also curious about Bernice's escape from her cocoon.
ReplyDeleteLove this story, Carrie, and Slugger, of course!
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