Saturday, May 4, 2019

Sometimes Longing Clings Too Tightly



Fledgling American Crow on Hand  
photo by Robert Langham


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God loved the birds and invented trees.  Man loved the birds and invented cages.
  ~Jacques Deval

Love’s comfort cannot be hunted down nor caged
It flies like freedom and loose feathers
I held it once
Close but not tightly
Not wanting to lose it too soon
I called it by its true name
Gentle and low
And it rested softly upon me
But sometimes longing clings too tightly
And with time my yearning to hold on
tightened
Hurting us both when you flew away
Now empty handed
I reach upward
And cry out
Perch upon me once more my dear one
Stay for as long as you like
Let my strength be your weakness
And I will use all the power I have
To not cage you in
But my words are lost on open skies
 and near or far your wings are never lost.



©Carrie Van Horn 2019

10 comments:

  1. The final pleas, the promises, the speaker's realization that caging was the wrong thing to do... are heartbreaking. It's so hard to get back something that has ran away because it couldn't breathe. And love, like any wild animal, doesn't trust do so well at the art of trusting (again).

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  2. Ohhh, this is heartbreaking and beautiful at the same time. That tension between holding and supporting is vividly rendered.

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  3. Thought provoking .Relationships can be very complicated.Excellent poem about an interesting subject.

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  4. We can omly hold so tightly to another before we smother. Well expressed here Carrie.

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  5. well expressed tribute to the need to have give and take in a relationship

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  6. Excellent! It is true. Wild things can't be caged or smothered. Sad in the please in the end.

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  7. Letting go is one of the hardest things we ever do. This so beautifully portrays that. Love doesn't smother even though we so want to do it.

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  8. I expect you're talking to the wind at this point, but good luck.

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  9. This is so poignant, and sad. Those wings will be flying the skies, I love that they are never lost. But it hurts, when they fly away.

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  10. A touching recount of holding too tightly. Well written!

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