Wednesday, April 24, 2019

Two Steps Forward

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Linking with Wednesday Muse # 5 "Let's Dance"
Today Toni is asking us to write an easy peasy Quadrille.
It is a poem that is exactly 44 words, not including the title.
Thank you Toni for another wonderful Wed prompt!
Here is my attempt at this:


Raindrops dance upon my window
Thoughts dance upon my mind
Waves dance upon the ocean
The clouds dance upon the sky
My heart beats to a rhythm the moon gives
Keeping movement to time’s own dance
 Its two steps forward and three steps back.



11 comments:

  1. May the one forward be loooolong leaps in perfect company!

    I love how you bring ocean and sky and a speaker's spirit together.

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  2. This is lovely, Carrie. Love the dance theme throughout.

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  3. Oh I love the theme of dance in this! And the bringung tigether. Love all of the dances in this. Absolutely wonderful.

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  4. Thank you all Magaly, Vicki and Toni! It was fun doing the prompt! Another wonderful one Toni! 😎🌻

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  5. Yes for sure! Just can't get ahead when your set back more than you move forward. 😎

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  6. Steps back to remember the good times? This feels joyous, regardless. :)

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  7. I like the union you have formed throughout this Quadrille, such a beautiful dance!

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  8. Beautifully done, Carrie . . :)

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