Everything is fragile
skyscrapers
bobby pins
an old woman’s hands
Styrofoam cups
the northern spotted owl
a human heart
you see even the moon has craters
being the old woman that I am
I have come to understand and know this
still my mind forgets all the details
but my heart remembers things
the flickering of starlight
the joyful tears of birth
the song they played at my grandfather’s funeral
falls that scrape more than knees
for words crash like waves upon a shore
relentless like a salesman
and serious like a preacher on Sunday
the memory of sorrows
is a child waiting
promised a day at the
county fair
you can bet your bottom dollar
that day will be remembered
in the joy of going and even more so in the not
it is all the things our hands never hold
that seem to leave the heaviest of weights
for a child never forgets
and one day that boy becomes a man
with a heart that still remembers
what a child cannot forget.
Carrie. This ripped at my heart. It hit me in a raw bruised place. I relate painfully. Powerful write my friend!
ReplyDelete“…it is all the things our hands never hold
that seem to leave the heaviest of weights
for a child never forgets”
"for words crash like waves upon a shore" - yes ma'am. Perfect.
ReplyDeletesuch a poignant telling, Carrie.
ReplyDeletethese lines really get to me:
"falls that scrape more than knees"
"it is all the things our hands never hold"
I love how you described the transience of living with such choice images, things that fade and decay, memories that don't. Really beautiful, Carrie. Love the whole of the opening first lines and these:
ReplyDelete"you see even the moon has craters"
"relentless like a salesman"
"the memory of sorrows
is a child waiting..."
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Nice write, Carrie. Revives memories, childhood ones seem to prevail. Thank you for putting the line, "day that boy becomes a man." I'm thinking most of us will search for their days, it didn't take very long for me.
ReplyDeleteBut I DO NOT share.
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I love how this moves through events that press themselves through the poem and into the reader. Heartbreaking.
ReplyDeleteOh Carrie, you have gifted us an amazing, deeply moving poem on this fine Sunday!!
ReplyDeleteI love the opening lines, Carrie. Life and all we grasp of it is fragile indeed. The end with the echo of broken promises is like a cold draft that still fans the embers, and we are stung both by hot and cold. Love what you did with the image--which I also love.
ReplyDelete"for words crash like waves upon a shore".... sometimes barely touching the sand, and eating away the beach, like happened during the storm of last week.
ReplyDeleteBut they find a place in the heart and even when forgotten, it's know they are there.
Loved this!!
Deftly said, Carrie. I sometimes wonder what my son remembers in this way.
ReplyDeleteWow. This is it exactly. I recall a tear rolling down my son's face, brimming with the words he did not know how to say. Gah.
ReplyDelete"for words crash like waves upon a shore
ReplyDeleterelentless like a salesman
and serious like a preacher on Sunday"
Powerful write Carrie
Have a good Sunday
Much love...
This might be my favorite poem of yours that I have read! The images are so well chosen and convey such emotion. I can't pick a favorite line - so many good ones!
ReplyDeleteThe raw emotion in this is like a knife wound.
ReplyDeleteI love,
"falls that scrape more than knees". Brilliant poem, Carrie!