Linking with Poet's United Midweek Motif ~Climate posted by Susan
The coldest winter I ever spent was a summer in San Francisco. ~Mark Twain
There has been a climate change in the center of my heart.
The polar ice caps are melting because love's light has left a mark.
No longer are there icebergs that could sink the grandest ship.
Now flows a current that allows a vessel's course to enter in.
Expansion of the heart is a pilgrimage that must endure a harsher cold.
For the only way to gain a deep love is to be a sailor that is bold.
Wow! Beautiful on every level. We learn from experience, but navigating gets more cautious rather than easier. Love. I'm working on boldness so I can do more than survive!
ReplyDeleteHow I resonate with this poem, for I have made that pilgrimage of the heart. I love this response to the prompt.....
ReplyDeleteWe must be bold to endure all the storms that love brings. Bravo!
ReplyDeleteExpansion of the heart is a pilgrimage that must endure a harsher cold.
ReplyDeleteSuch a strong & powerful voice..!
If there is warmth in your life there will also be cold as well as they hand in hand just like love and grief. However I agree boldness definitely helps!
ReplyDeleteThis is a very beautiful poem. I had to read it twice as it made me feel warm.
ReplyDeleteLuv the wisdom of those last 2 lines. Yes. Loving is such that, we cannot be faint-hearted
ReplyDeleteI'm happy you dropped by to read mine
Thanks for sharing the Mark Twain quote
Much love...
Bold sailors and love...oh wouldn't it be luverly !:)
ReplyDeleteOur own inner climate change!
ReplyDeleteI love the flow of this..like finding shore..a sense of safety and self even..also love the quote - it made me smile..what's inside is what seems to guide our little boats..may you long be a bold sailor
ReplyDeleteBoldly sailing forth - taking the chance to love (and therefore be loved) is often a climate of opposite forces.
ReplyDeleteFor me, this line struck a chord:
ReplyDelete" Expansion of the heart is a pilgrimage that must endure a harsher cold."
Emotive write, Carrie.
Bold and beautiful! Lovely flow..
ReplyDeleteThis part is really good Carrie:
ReplyDeleteFor the only way to gain a deep love is to be a sailor that is bold.
May we learn to be bold in our journey ~
Excellent metaphor making for a wonderful poem, Carrie! I enjoyed this one very much.
ReplyDeleteBoldly sailing forth - taking the chance to love is often a climate of opposite forces.
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